The set-up

Imagine that there are no proper ride-hailing apps around - it is 2008 when the taxi riding experience has not been disrupted yet. Our team is thinking about creating a ride-sharing app.

The team's goal is to shape the product.

A designer and a user researcher suggested the following script (the below script was generated by GPT-4 with a few prompts - it's okay to assume that it is a typical result of what a more junior researcher would produce). My job as a PM is to improve the script so that we achieve our goal - shape the best possible product of all, and there are always so many ways to prioritize user problems and solutions.

I am seeing a lot of opportunities for improvement. Both tactical and strategic. Below you can see the initial script and my constructive feedback to it.

<aside> 🚦 It could be better to scan the initial script in full first, and then read my improvements. Initial script is in black font; my comments are in purple.

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Logic Behind the Script

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Introduction (2-3 minutes)

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Good, but there are 2 other important things:

  1. Manage expectations about time. Allow ourselves to go a bit over time if the convo becomes interesting - yet request permission for this in advance :). E.g. "This talk will take 30-40 minutes. Is this okay with you?"
  2. If you might cover sensitive issues - confirm that they are in a good place: e.g. “Is it a good time and place to talk for you?”(hinting at closing the door for colleagues or kids, etc.)
  3. re “Your feedback today will be invaluable in shaping our service.”: Let us have a friendlier tone of voice :)

Other points, to be used as needed:

Background Information (3-5 minutes)